by How often do you think about me?
When someone touches your hair,
Laughs at your jokes,
Hurts you,
Or just watches you giggle endlessly,
Do you wish that it was me?
When someone pushes you away
To pull you closer,
Looks in your eyes
And smiles with curled lips
And crinkled eyes,
Do you wish that it was me?
When someone gives you roses,
Chocolates,
Or adventure and Love,
When someone wraps his arm
around your shoulders,
Do you wish it was my heartbeat,
My arms and my warm grip,
Do you wish that it was me?
When someone holds your hands,
Rubs your palms,
Kisses the back of your hand,
Holds it forever,
Do you wish it was the folds of my fingers,
And hope in my eyes?
Do you wish it was me?
Do you think about me as often
As blades think of cutting,
And the band-aid of healing?
Do you, as often
As the sun of burning,
And the water of drowning?
Do you think about me as often
As the clock of ticking away,
And the days of making us wait?
Do you think about me as often
As I think of you,
Or not at all?
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Awww. This us really sad Ustav. Good poem. Heartfelt
Utsav* but thank you!
I love this. It’s so full of emotion and tugged at my heartstrings. ❤️
I’m really glad I could make you smile. You have a beautiful smile, after all. ❤
Aww, you’re very sweet ❤️
Haha thank you. We should totally get to know each other.
That sounds nice 🙂
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Just type in Outanabout and my name Miriam
Gorgeous poem!
Thank you ❤
This can make anyone believe in love 💜
Thank you ❤
You just penned my heart into the papers! Even my thoughts were (and ‘are’) drifting over the same question, that will they think about me the way I think about them!
Thank you for this poem!
Thank you ❤
this.is.amazing <3
Thank you so much ❤
Nice
Thank you ❤
I swear I imagined some old English writer weaving these words together with so much pain and love, it was almost beauty. Then I read your name and thought, Of Course! I love how the last line after all that emotional cressendo with imagery just finishes this piece perfectly.
Thank you ❤
Truly beautiful creation….
Thank you Geet.
Welcome…
This is tragically beautiful! What a wistful feeling this brings out; wonderful writing!
I’m really really glad you liked it, Tejasvi.
Very well-written! :)
This makes me cry! Since I’m reaching the end of my life, I think that I am crying for a different reason then most of your followers. It makes me think of a song by Adele. But beautifully different!xo
Thank you so much ❤
You start good, trail out beautiful and finish your compo phenominally.
Thank you ❤
I like that you are very brave when you write. Keep going, I am bookmarking and following. Also, thanks for visiting my blog
Anytime. Thank you for reading.
Good read.. I love this poem :)
Thank you so much, love ❤
Such expressive pain and tenderness in your poem 💜
This made me feel like crying. I feel you 💔
Wow!!
Beautiful. Strong.
This is so beautiful ;) :*
Thank you, beautiful!❤
👍❤
What a beautiful poem :)
Thank you so much, beautiful.
:)
It’s very amazing.
It’s heartening and momentous..
Wow.. 💕
Love it.. !😍
This is beautiful
Well…. that was deep
Glad you liked it.
All your poems seem very heartfelt. Some poets I don’t feel the “connection” to it but it all of your poems seem very evocative
That really means a lot. Give me a link to your latest poem?
This is so heartfelt ☺️
Thank you, Sarah.
Truly hear sent beautiful Sir
Thank you so much!
Nice poem !!! Beautiful! ! 👍👍👍👍.. also thank you Utsav to like my all 3 posts! !! You read them all and really likeed
Glad you liked it. And yes, I really liked them. Well done, love.
Liked* ???
I swear, if you had a book composed entirely of your poems, I’d buy every copy.
That means so much to me! It won’t be too long before there is such a book, so hang here for a while longer?
I’ll be waiting patiently :)
Happy to hear that!